I'm starting to get into this style. I think the Holocaust and a couple other historic events get stuck in my mind easy and I like reading about those subjects because it's something that happened. Actually I don't know why they gt stuck in my head.

But your words were good and helped establish a mood that would help your reader understand the poem.

That is such an amazing poem. You did a wonderful job. Deep and emotional

You did such an amazing job on this poem. You described everything so well and it was so sad. I loved the way that you worded it and it was just very good. Great job on this! 5/5

It is so sad, i can relate this to the time when i haad to leave my hometown because of war,
very well done. 5/5

This was really nicely done, Noni. You used great wording, but you didn't overdo it like I usually do =P Tehe. You flow was great, and the rhymes you used were also great! Keep it up! 5/5

Natalie``

Very well done Noni, well researched poem. I love history, and World War II is one of my most favourite events, so I know a lot about the war, and the holocaust and everything else. I loved this poem! Awesome stuff :)

Excellent!!!! Very Well Done... it had a lot of emotions in it... i could feel it when i was reading the poem!!! it was awsome!!!

Keep it up!

Wow, it's such a sad topic, but very well written.

[Only rhythmic tunes of a shooting gun]
^^ My favourite line. I thought it just popped out to me. It's very descriptive for the shooting of a gun, and a lot of people can't create lines well enough to explain a sound. Well done. =) 5/5 xoxo

Samantha

A world where blood bury once beating hearts
((Buries...maybe?))
A place where timeless love must depart
((I love this line..))
Young men covering the corpse of their bride
(And loved this line.. It was so sad!))

I loved this.. I will be honest, it did not make me cry, but it was very beautifully written and even though I haven't read the rest of the poems yet, I am sure it stands high in the ratings. Wonderful write, as always.

xDarkSuicidex 5.5

Another great peom u have here 5/5

Wow...That's amazingly well written and horribly sad. I had tears in my eyes reading this. Nice job Noni.

Wow!!!!!!!!!!! This is a very strong, deep, emotional, poem. I loved it. You have a special way of painting your picture for the world to see and I think it is excellent. 5/5

Letty

Another good poem. i liked this one too? Did you win the contest, because if not, you should have. 5/5

Wow, noni, this was utterly amazing. It was so well written, and it was also kind of personnal, like you saw more than just the numbers of people dying. I liked the first stanza better than the second, but they were both really good, keep up the good work.

--Steph

Great Poem! 5/5

This was amaizing!! My eyes are all watery. This was sooo good...I don't have anything to say for this poem...I loved it!!! 5/5

Brilliant journey......Thank you for your efforts....These must have been challenging images to work with........

I really like this poem!

That so true im reading a book in school called night and its about that and it talks about throwing little children babies into fires those nazi and everyone that was apart of that horrible place should die a horrible dead

You have so much talent...don't ever give it up.