Incredible! Very sad though, I loved the rhyming, everything flowed very smoothly through. My favorite lines:
Listen carefully and you'll hear the Earth cry
As the smell of lost hope carpet the sky
Again Amazing!
5/5

Wow. i really like that ... speechless

-Terra

Wow that was really good 5/5 for sure!!! i hope you won 1st place cuz you sure deserved it!!

Wow that was really good 5/5 for sure!!! i hope you won 1st place cuz you sure deserved it!!

That painted such an amazing picture. It was so desperate and sad. I've many times thought of writing on this but just couldn't put it into words but you did it beautifully. Great job! 5/5
~Midnight Sun

Very sad! Good imagery and depiction of such travesty. Great job!