I'm starting to get into this style. I think the Holocaust and a couple other historic events get stuck in my mind easy and I like reading about those subjects because it's something that happened. Actually I don't know why they gt stuck in my head. |
That is such an amazing poem. You did a wonderful job. Deep and emotional |
by Bridgette
You did such an amazing job on this poem. You described everything so well and it was so sad. I loved the way that you worded it and it was just very good. Great job on this! 5/5 |
by Goran Rahim
It is so sad, i can relate this to the time when i haad to leave my hometown because of war, |
by Natalie
This was really nicely done, Noni. You used great wording, but you didn't overdo it like I usually do =P Tehe. You flow was great, and the rhymes you used were also great! Keep it up! 5/5 |
by Darien
Very well done Noni, well researched poem. I love history, and World War II is one of my most favourite events, so I know a lot about the war, and the holocaust and everything else. I loved this poem! Awesome stuff :) |
by Robie Lincer
Excellent!!!! Very Well Done... it had a lot of emotions in it... i could feel it when i was reading the poem!!! it was awsome!!! |
Wow, it's such a sad topic, but very well written. |
A world where blood bury once beating hearts |
by X2892
Another great peom u have here 5/5 |
by Megann Lee
Wow...That's amazingly well written and horribly sad. I had tears in my eyes reading this. Nice job Noni. |
by Letty
Wow!!!!!!!!!!! This is a very strong, deep, emotional, poem. I loved it. You have a special way of painting your picture for the world to see and I think it is excellent. 5/5 |
by Tawny
Another good poem. i liked this one too? Did you win the contest, because if not, you should have. 5/5 |
Wow, noni, this was utterly amazing. It was so well written, and it was also kind of personnal, like you saw more than just the numbers of people dying. I liked the first stanza better than the second, but they were both really good, keep up the good work. |
Great Poem! 5/5 |
by Liz
This was amaizing!! My eyes are all watery. This was sooo good...I don't have anything to say for this poem...I loved it!!! 5/5 |
Brilliant journey......Thank you for your efforts....These must have been challenging images to work with........ |
I really like this poem! |
by amanda
That so true im reading a book in school called night and its about that and it talks about throwing little children babies into fires those nazi and everyone that was apart of that horrible place should die a horrible dead |
by Jenni Marie
You have so much talent...don't ever give it up. |