Darkness

by Dark_Angel   Sep 30, 2006


Black is the sky
whom cries rain
whom causes pain
why do you all cry?

black is the heart
of a abusive father
whom is a bother
as a family falls apart

black is the world
that is full of fear
falling is a tear
around a curled

black is my life
as i end it with a knife

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  • 17 years ago

    by Sweet lig

    Amazing its great! just keep on writing coz i can see u have the talent to show so keep it up and god bless u i like your poem 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Haven

    Hmmm quite good however the flow isn't perfect and the wors use drags it down, although I love the start sentence of eery verse, and the last part is perfect! 4/5

  • 17 years ago

    by ~~Lindsay Woods~~

    Hey u!.. yeah way to start off!!!.. your awesome!.. i don't think that i would change anything about it.. you are very good so far.. i am looking forward to seeing more poems from you soon!
    love ya lots
    Lindsay

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