The more i read the more I liked it. Your last three stanza's were great! I loved it. Jpoet*

Wonderful poem! The last lines held the structure of this poem together, it was excellent. I loved the effect your last words brought to the ending. Very heartfelt write. Keep it up!

p.s: I'll say hi. =)

"Our summer remembered with longing and grief
Tears and desiring can't bring you back here
And Time, I've discovered is really a thief!"

Ahh... I loved these lines. So beautifully expressed, and so true. A simple, yet at the same time complex idea. Such wonderful work you do. I look forward to your next write.

Kind Regards
Luna

Very interesting write, I've read it a few times over.
Wonderful work.

God Bless!

This is beautiful.I can really relate to the emotion that just bursts forth.But the metaphors/similies are fantastic and such an original rhyme scheme!This is perfect in every way.Full of love and yet so melancholy.

Peace, Poetry, & Power,

Gary Jurechka

The word have descent which takes ur breath away

RIGHT ON! nicely done i loved it

Another great poem very well written always luv reading ur work =] xx

You can really feel the love in this one.

Awwww sad yet beautiful writing. I just loved the begining though, so detailed and I love metaphores. 5/5