Summer Lovin'

by Poetvoices   Oct 2, 2006


Eyes meet once.
Beat everyone hears--bud appears.
The moon takes full force,
like premature tears.

The bud begins to shed some skin
with the meeting of lips--like no other trip
and fireworks fly,
and open it rips.

Full bloom is beautiful
hand in hand--plans will stand.
The rain has stopped,
and the scent lost again.

Just barely, they say
though their fingers entwined--first sip of wine
the sand slips to rock bottom
fresh out of time.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Jacob

    Hey I thought it was good but it lost its point here and there so figured I should tell u

  • 17 years ago

    by Alicia

    That was really nice. 5/5

    ~Alicia

  • Awww, that was so pretty! it really created good images in my head, i LOVED the rhyme scheme, very cool, and the word choice was awesome!