I really like the ending. That is what really brought it togeather. Nice job.

Wow it was beautifully penned this is a great poem and I love the contradiction and similaryty of words you used I love how you put it together

Very well written and great piece

geneross

Yeh! very good poem..very dark but still its great! like chris i liked the ending alot it flowed very well together! and you know the rest about how much i like it...lol! keep wrting hun! youre great!

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~D*K~

That was really good i think that you possibly could have went further with it but nevertheless it was a really good poem!!

I lvoe it, not much imagery but great jobb. keep it up.

lissa

Wow!!deep stuff!!great job!!the ending was great!! and it flowed perfectly it was...flawless!!keep writing hun!!
~Rachel~

Lvoe how u repeated the line: souls of the dead made it more powerfful and real for the reader./.nie imagery...

think it would've been more powerful tf you hadnt mentionsd the word souls in the poem since its the title but yeah..good jobb.

lissa

Wow..that was deep...it was really good though. Comemnt back.
5/5

It was totally different but not ur best

It is interesting, very unique and it has great imagery. Rhythm of this poem is excellent, it truly isn't your best work but it is good.