Heart broken

He broke my heart
He just stood their
And watched me bleed
I'm trying to breath but i couldnt
Every time i open my mouth
It would be full of blood coming out of my eyes!!
He broke my heart so badly
I just couldn't under stand why
He did this to me
I'm not hot enough for you?
I'm not wild enough for you?
So i get a knife and try to kill myself...
But then I thought
It shouldn't be me doing this
It should be you so i pass
The Knife to you and watch you
Bleed and watch the life disappear
from your body..
Here i sit upon your grave with a smile on my face thinking your such a big disgrace to this place

I'M NOT DONE BUT I JUST WANTED TO SEE WHAT YOU THINK ABOUT MY UNFINISHED WORK>>>COMMENT ON IT PLZ!