Comments : Halloween Kiss

  • 17 years ago

    by Bill Turner

    Wonderfully written. I love the flow and scheme of this one. Perfect ending.

  • 17 years ago

    by Sarah Ann

    Beautiful poem. Wonderful and intense imagery too, I pictured the scene the whole way through. Keep it up!

  • 17 years ago

    by Lu

    Shadows cling to the forest
    Draining the world of every hue
    Light from the wavering crescent moon
    Amongst the treetops filters through
    ^^
    An amazing first stanza that just draws you in .
    Each stanza leading you up to a chilling ending . The imagery gave me goosebumps .
    Wonderully written Kim !

  • 17 years ago

    by Laura

    I am left speechless after this read....the flow was undisturbed and the rhymes were awesome!!

  • 17 years ago

    by Robert Gardiner

    Very nicely done Kim, enjoyed!!!

  • 17 years ago

    by Melissa

    This is awesome, Kim... A perfectly written Halloween poem. Love the story, very creative!