Fear is Love

by MischieviousMya   Oct 3, 2006


Fear is something i held inside,
behind this mask i always cried.

It seemed like forever until i met you
You only showed me what love could do.

But you would say such hurtful things
Yet i brushed it off like it meant nothin to me.

We were too young to think of this long lasting relaionship,
So i decided to hold on, keep my bear grip.

Not only did love show the differences between us,
It also showed me that is was never love is was lust.

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  • 17 years ago

    by x.Athame.x

    The fist two stanzas are very nice, but then the flow changes for the second two. This throws the rhythm off a little. The last one is fine. I would, personally, suggest keeping the rhythm a little more consistent, but its still a nice poem. I also think you have a good idea here, but need to elaborate on it. Move into a little more depth. Overall this is a nice poem. 3/5

    Kind Regards,
    Luna

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