I like this but it is so short it's almost like a quote. It is beautiful though. lol...thank you for the comments and I needed sugg. for the beginning...I think it needs something...not sure what though. (^_^)
Anyway I liked this but try to add more to it...you have talent.
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Breanna

It's interesting.

Okay...hmm..i liked your descriptions but it doesn't sound like a poem at all, more like a part to a story. I don't think the coffee part fit in with your first line. I think if anything you should do it like an adventure poem because this man sounds inspiring, fearful, and adventurous. Hope this helps! Jpoet*