Fall to Pieces

by Samantha   Oct 4, 2006


Today is the day
where my life falls to pieces
shattered on the ground
like the broken mirror
of my past
the pain and the hurt
displayed on my face
for the world to see
but do they see me
the confused child who
loves one but needs another
who shouts to the crowd
see me now you dont know me
but youre the ones who judge me
who make love hard
the ones who tell us
that your someone isnt perfect
and that day
when they lose their special someone
due to popular belief
is the day that someones life
falls to pieces

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  • 17 years ago

    by Purple

    Beautifll poem. It's not particually fluid, but it works that way. The message you send came through clearly, keeping my interest the whole way. I like the way you came back with the falling to peices idea at the end, it really helps connect everything...

    Great job, you win a 5/5 from me.

    Anyway, if your the Samantha who PMed me, I couldn't reply because your signed up with a invaild E-mail or what ever. If your not that person, I'm sorry for the confusoin. If you are her, I'd like to say I don't know what writting you're talking about, because I've written about my opinoin on here lots of times. If your her, pls PM me and also give me your E-mial so I can reply.

  • 17 years ago

    by XbleedingangelX

    Amazing!!! sorry i have nothing else to say cause i gtg latr

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