Comments : Shadowspoet.

  • 17 years ago

    by *Charisma*

    Like the hidden scent of an unbudded rose.
    I loved that line...so unique. Thanks for all ur comments, your a fav. Jpoet*

  • 17 years ago

    by blueknight

    An extreme poem thjis is sad and so great Im speachless when I read it IOt takes me in a different world of poetry the words you use and of how you penned it was amazing very true emotions and vivid details

    Great Job

    Geneross

  • 17 years ago

    by Fixxxer

    All i can say is wow.. that was some of the deepest poetry i've encountered. Amazingly well written and beautifully worded. 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Misstress

    "And now his guard has fallen
    For he have become weak and under her spell."
    "Cut mercy with a sharp knife to the bone.

    A fool his may be possibly,
    But love laws his speak with tears,
    the love he kept within his heart
    For her ever more, his lover...."

    These lines tells a lot of the story/thoughts and emotions..
    Lovely write indeed.

    "For beauty is truth, true beauty, that is all."
    this line is the most powerful line in the poem for me.

    God Bless!

  • 17 years ago

    by UnToLd TrUtH

    This has so much emotion in it and you controled very well.

  • 17 years ago

    by Deana

    Your poems are like walking into another time zone, an old romantic era. wonderful and sweet.

  • 17 years ago

    by dora

    Very touching great use of words in this one as all ur poems. xx

  • 17 years ago

    by RainbowSlider

    Such beautiful poetry you write.

  • 17 years ago

    by FlirtingWithDeath

    Mmmm I love this poem, this is what got you to win the contest. wonderful writing 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Letty

    Bravo! You are beyond what words can explain. I loved this. It's really wonderful. 5/5

    Love
    Letty

  • 17 years ago

    by DarkPoetess

    Beautifully written...keep them coming... write well and god bless

  • 17 years ago

    by debbylyn

    Beautiful....absolutely beautiful. 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Crazygirl yeh

    Great (shakespeare style?)

  • 17 years ago

    by Cindy

    Very beautiful poem. Your words paint a picture of love!

  • 17 years ago

    by KemistryKia

    That was beatiful, i love how you started and how it unraveled
    to me that's one of the best things of reading poetry and you've conquired it, you have lots of talent

  • 16 years ago

    by Nix

    Beautifully written poem, great choice of words.
    -Bleedeth his veins they shall
    To see her walk the purest of heaven's dreams.
    No regrets of how one feels for thee,
    Like the hidden scent of an unbudded rose.-
    ^ my favorite stanza.
    Well done. 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Rachel RTVW

    For he has become weak and under her spell.
    Nevertheless, he renders his joy
    To a woman so beautiful, lineal of a goddess indeed.

    Bleedeth his veins they shall
    To see her walk the purest of heaven's dreams.
    No regrets of how one feels for thee,
    Like the hidden scent of an unbudded rose.

    Believe how he loves thee, believe how near
    his soul to its doom, he would not grieve
    For love is divine, as divine as it can be.
    he set his weary soul in flames to please.

    No honors, no pride, no glory he has inside.
    Just his love at stake,
    And her free will to decide.
    Cut mercy with a sharp knife to the bone.

    A fool he may be possibly,
    But love laws he speaks with tears,
    the love he kept within his heart
    For her ever more, his lover....

    I corrected a few grammar mistakes. The poem was very beautiful. You did a great job!

  • 16 years ago

    by NyellMoonlight

    Oh my god, another one superbly written! Wording in the whole poem is great, and the flow is good too. The final impression: Simply breath- taking.
    The most beautiful love poem I read recently.
    You're so talented, I envy your poetic skills!
    5/5 from me.

  • 16 years ago

    by Mr M

    A masterful piece...

  • 15 years ago

    by ForeverASickKid

    Im speechless ! amazing work! 5/5