Like the hidden scent of an unbudded rose.
I loved that line...so unique. Thanks for all ur comments, your a fav. Jpoet*

An extreme poem thjis is sad and so great Im speachless when I read it IOt takes me in a different world of poetry the words you use and of how you penned it was amazing very true emotions and vivid details

Great Job

Geneross

All i can say is wow.. that was some of the deepest poetry i've encountered. Amazingly well written and beautifully worded. 5/5

"And now his guard has fallen
For he have become weak and under her spell."
"Cut mercy with a sharp knife to the bone.

A fool his may be possibly,
But love laws his speak with tears,
the love he kept within his heart
For her ever more, his lover...."

These lines tells a lot of the story/thoughts and emotions..
Lovely write indeed.

"For beauty is truth, true beauty, that is all."
this line is the most powerful line in the poem for me.

God Bless!

This has so much emotion in it and you controled very well.

Your poems are like walking into another time zone, an old romantic era. wonderful and sweet.

Very touching great use of words in this one as all ur poems. xx

Such beautiful poetry you write.

Mmmm I love this poem, this is what got you to win the contest. wonderful writing 5/5

Bravo! You are beyond what words can explain. I loved this. It's really wonderful. 5/5

Love
Letty

Beautifully written...keep them coming... write well and god bless

Beautiful....absolutely beautiful. 5/5

Great (shakespeare style?)

Very beautiful poem. Your words paint a picture of love!

That was beatiful, i love how you started and how it unraveled
to me that's one of the best things of reading poetry and you've conquired it, you have lots of talent

Beautifully written poem, great choice of words.
-Bleedeth his veins they shall
To see her walk the purest of heaven's dreams.
No regrets of how one feels for thee,
Like the hidden scent of an unbudded rose.-
^ my favorite stanza.
Well done. 5/5

For he has become weak and under her spell.
Nevertheless, he renders his joy
To a woman so beautiful, lineal of a goddess indeed.

Bleedeth his veins they shall
To see her walk the purest of heaven's dreams.
No regrets of how one feels for thee,
Like the hidden scent of an unbudded rose.

Believe how he loves thee, believe how near
his soul to its doom, he would not grieve
For love is divine, as divine as it can be.
he set his weary soul in flames to please.

No honors, no pride, no glory he has inside.
Just his love at stake,
And her free will to decide.
Cut mercy with a sharp knife to the bone.

A fool he may be possibly,
But love laws he speaks with tears,
the love he kept within his heart
For her ever more, his lover....

I corrected a few grammar mistakes. The poem was very beautiful. You did a great job!

Oh my god, another one superbly written! Wording in the whole poem is great, and the flow is good too. The final impression: Simply breath- taking.
The most beautiful love poem I read recently.
You're so talented, I envy your poetic skills!
5/5 from me.

A masterful piece...

Im speechless ! amazing work! 5/5