Comments : The Thinking Man

  • 13 years ago

    by Mitzi

    Wonderful!!! loved it!!

  • 13 years ago

    by Beauty In The Breaking

    Another great work by the wonderful Hawkeye! 5/5

    I've loved reading all of yours so far and just have one more left. =)

  • 13 years ago

    by Deana

    You have a mature knowledge of life for one so young,great job my young friend.

  • 13 years ago

    by IdTakeABulletForYou

    A complicated poem... The punctuation is off. Where some periods are there should be question marks, etc... I am not really sure If I quite found a flow in this poem... although I know that there must be one. I must reread this poem. I'm still trying to figure out what the meaning is.

    Overall, the meaning was well put, and although the overall meaning was cliche, the way you put it into words WAS unique.

    Well written,
    ~Stephen White

  • 13 years ago

    by geeeeee

    "Do you think of nature, its soft sounds and beauty
    Do you think of life, how it came and how it will go
    Do you think of love, it's warming touch to one's heart
    Or do you think, of yourself as time goes by for eternity."

    For your age you write amazingly. This was a really touching and poignant write. Great job

    Take Care.

  • 13 years ago

    by Tricky Daze

    It was so real and explained the images of life so well my lil bro
    And you write further away from your age..And it's so cool
    I was writing 'Roses are red....' kind of things when I was at your age :)
    Keep it up,

  • 13 years ago

    by Noelle Wright

    Haha i like this poem you just blew me away i cant believe how great some of your poems are and you just being 12 wow your gonna be A POET for sure when you are older =]