Comments : Take that chance

  • 17 years ago

    by Chris Rodriguez

    An emotional write that truely comes from the heart. Everybody needs somebody. Great poem.

  • 17 years ago

    by dollwithafrown

    Very emotional and from the heart. I liked very much. Again though, a few mistakes -

    "He has somethings in common with you,"

    It should be "He has some things in common with you,"

    "When you don't have confidence in your self,"

    'Yourself' is all one word. =]

    Good job.

  • 17 years ago

    by ALEX

    Woww.. this is my favorite one so far!

  • 17 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    This is my favourite, I was smiling when I read it.
    So true and meaningful and so sweet.
    You have a lot of talent.