Another amazing poem by you, each time I read one of your poems, you become more greater in my eyes...
keep up the great work like always,5/5

Extremely hopeful!! :) I LOVE your stuff!!

This poem made me smile at the end. it does sound like a wonderful place. i wish i was there right now.
Take care
HS

Perfect!
The scenery/place youve created is just perfect.

Keep on writing on what you feel and like..
5/5

God Bless!

I like the idea of this poem and how you put it together. Clever. =] Keep it up. 5/5

Hi Letty

I love this poem and i'd be glad to go to the place described here ,if there is such a place and once my purpose of life has been fulfilled.so hun keep up the wonderful work!

Love
Suda,

Simply Amazing! Your rhyming timed and put in the right places.. and the beat of the poem was incredible! my favorite line is:
You too can make it just treat people right and after your done here you can live real life.
Great Job!
5/5

Perfect imagery yet again, amazing flow and words, breathtaking piece.