Let me go

by emad   Oct 11, 2006


LET ME GO

let me go just like passing clouds
just like the tree the birds get rest on it and then leave
we will never meet it's destiny judgment
if we meet this will be life mistake

cold and warm will never meet
nor quiet night and storm
don't wait for rainless cloud
don't wait and waste your years
my heart cannot deal with loving the spring
in time words Iâ??m just losing life

if we meet you and me
our thoughts will never
mine are different my habits are different
your feeling will be lost and strange
and i will feel that Iâ??m loosing you
there is nothing between us but separation
what can I do
it's time order us and we obey
let me go

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  • 17 years ago

    by Cindy

    This is a excellent write. The coming to terms of there being nothing left between two people is very sad. Good job!

  • 17 years ago

    by Cherry

    Emad...Everytime i read a poem written by u I become more and more speechless.
    The way you describe things, makes the reader draw a picture in his mind, a picture that takes him somewhere else....
    Its almost like a fake one...
    One that only exist in our dreams....
    I really hope you will find your love soon...
    And just one more thing i wanted to add to this poem...
    Different minds, do come along...
    Opposite attracks ;)
    Or in other words...
    Ara2 mo5talifi btojzob :)
    Excellent writing

  • 17 years ago

    by X2892

    Hey^.^
    ur poem was very good, 5/5

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