The "Lord's" Prayer

by V a n i t y V e i n 6 9   Oct 12, 2006


Our Lord, who art in His grave,
Death is thy name.
Thy kingdom of scum,
Thy will be done,
On earth as it is in Hell.
Give us this night,
Our nightly blood.
And praise us of our sins,
As we praise those,
Who sin with us.
Lead us into great temptation
for you have surrender us... to Evil.

Amen

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  • 17 years ago

    by Pandorra13

    NICE! i like it (though i believe earth itself is a purgetory. theres no real hell except here.)

  • 17 years ago

    by ♥ brokendolly ♥

    I love it!

  • 17 years ago

    by Kylead

    Well done
    you didnt depress me
    you kept true to the dark poem part of the site for this 5/5 and keep writing i chack frequetently on dark and dark fantasy

  • 17 years ago

    by Silent Screams

    Well done...short but gets to the point
    auna

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