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by Alexis Oct 12, 2006 category : Dark, fantasy / other
Dark skys Fallen tears I lay awake Seldom to all thats nearBlue skys No more tears I fall asleep With no more fears I wish everyday could be blue because then i could think of you
by Alexis
Thanx for ur comments i really appreciate them!
by LadyPearl
Great job, I loved the imagery. The last line a bit long, you could make another line
by robin milford
I enjoyed this poem keep writing u r good