Another great poem. Sad and well written. You have great imagery in the poem. Well done.

I LoVe YouR PoeM.....KeeP iT uP.....

patti

Very well composed. The feelings were strong as well as the main storyline. keep it up

You suffer from inflicting yourself with depression
The only person that can save you is yourself
I hope you wake up tomorrow morning
With a little more than an empty space
^^
Amazing ending stanza Darien

So much emotion set forth in this piece .I hope all is well dear heart .
Take care

Beautiful poem.

You suffer from inflicting yourself with depression
The only person that can save you is yourself

^^I really liked those two lines! Cause it's very true.. The only person who can save you is yourself.. ;P Nicely done!

The poem was great Darien! So sorry I've slacked off on commenting ;P

You had a great flow and nice rhyming, and the emotions were great too! Awesome job SMAWCe brother. 5/5

Natalie``

[I said those lines like it was my last words]
Shouldn't it be "they" not "it"?

Wow.. This was a really sad poem Darien.. It is also very true.. The flow was good, the descriptions and vocabulary you used pulled it together well.. I liked the title too, it was quite interesting.. Lol.. Keep up the excellent work hun! 5/5

Again, another wonderful poem. You surely have a way with words. So much emotion written here, i think the idea of it was really good. Keep it up. =] 5/5

WOW! This is a truly wonderful poem! Sad, yes, but wonderful. This poem was very unique, and thought up very well. The flow was good and the descriptions were absolutely amazing.

[Broken and confused you looked for answers
But the problems were lying next to you
I couldn't stay knowing you didn't care
So I left you buried in the sands of time]
^^I liked that stanza the most. It was just the one that seemed to stand out to me. =) Great write! 5/5 xoxo

Samantha

Beautiful sad penned, flowed well with beautiful emotions, what else i can say here, marvellous!

This poem was so vivid. Hmm, how do i describe this... well... it gave me goosebumps, made me stop for five minutes and ponder... than nod my head in agreement. This poem was amazing. It touched me a personal level, as if to say it seemed it was written for me. Very weird. Excellent job.
5/5 and three cheers!
*Keep smiling*
Katy

Hello Hello.
This poem was well written, I loved the idea and many people could relate I'm sure. Which is good for readers. Great word usage and even without rhytem[sp?] you got a good flow which is quite hard to do ^.^
Well done =)

Very good keep them comein

I didn't understand the second stanza for some reason, but I still like this poem. It seems like there's a typo in the fourth stanza-- "I said those lines like it was my last words"-- but maybe I'm just not reading it correctly. Anyway, I really like the ending of this poem, the last lines are great-- they really sum up the meaning of the poem. 5/5

Beautiful poem

Lol. I liked it but it confused me a bit. Lol.

I really liked the imagery in this.

Wow thats a great poem.

5 out of 5 from me

keep it up

lysette x x x

I.like.the.last.fragment...gives.me.
hope...makes.me.stronger!!
Thanks...
Miss.Blackheart

Not too shabby! Keep it up.