Comments : Candelabra

  • 14 years ago

    by Bret Higgins

    Rut roh, some one grew up whilst I wasn't looking. This piece oozes maturity and clarity. Don't you find it more rewarding to write about this subject without actually writing about it? It suits your style, it really does.

    Couple of minor niggles:

    'And no one does' deserves to be its own statement of fact, not part of a larger whole.

    I would use feigned instead of feign to keep pace with the rest of the poem, but that's it.

    I think this could be your best work, from my perspective at least. Time flies, huh?

  • 14 years ago

    by Michael D Nalley

    This profound romantic lyric poem penned eloquently in free verse

  • 14 years ago

    by Robert Gardiner

    Wonderful fair Libra, wonderful; a magnificently penned poem!!!