The secret

by hesXmyXrainbow   Oct 14, 2006


The tear drops
and thoughts
of you and her
and the something you were

the lies
and ties
to keep it going
and the stuff you two weren't showing

but in the end
it was all pretend
like a fairytale
and yet it failed

what could have been
what went wrong then
they were so perfect
and yet it wasn't worth it

to show how they felt
instead of the lies they dealt
to one another
they hid the others

so perfect they were
and yet so unsure
i guess they got scared
at the feelings they never shared

and so it goes
and yet i only know
the secret they hold
that mustn't be told

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  • 17 years ago

    by kacy

    Hey this poems is really cool i think it was brilliant but just a suggestion in the nxt to last stanza you say " I guess they got scared and let their love get teared" well teared isn't a word and it didn't quite make since maybe you coukd try something like "i guess they got scared and their love they couldn't bear" just a suggestion but i really like you poem you are very talented

    luv kacy

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