It just was simply written, yet creative penned, absolutely beautiful poem!

It seems also the dreams we chase are usually just out of reach yet only in our dreams are we content my interpretation of this poem is fleeting moment in which a dream seemed to be a reality..great poem

Simply beautiful. I like you style of writing, its unique. Nice flow and imagery. I especially liked the lines:

"Last night my ideal reality
was intensely deep so different,
from my living essence.
Waking ashamed,
don't leave it there
alone."

Made me think =) Your a great writing, keep up the awesome work.
--Angie xoox

Such emotions well written

An interesting write, and i like the unique topic. You wrote it well, with a good use of vocab, and emotions expressed well. My favorite stanza was the first one, very deep i think. Well done. =] 5/5

Another nice poem!
you got the talent...
the words you used where nice too..
keep it up!