Such emotions well written

Hmmm.. very interesting! i like the message and thanks for sharing,,, i think u can write more so just keep up the good work and keep on writing 5/5

Not only does this poem flow well, it also has a powerful messege

Wow, wonderful write. The structure and the flow was awesome. So much emotion and such a powerful messege that lies within.

Ciao, Joe

Wow, very powerful ending..i really liked how the second half of the poem was formed..very creative..and i loved the message you put into it..very good job, 5/5

Wow... this poem is so true. i cant find anything to criticize here... good job 5/5

This is really true, aint it? and its so sad as well.... well, i think you did a fantastic job, theres nothing really else to say. but i would if there was...lol
Emily

Very well written, very powerful and emotive, great rhythm and flow. the structure was excellent, i loved it 5/5

Very well written. i loved it and can completely understand and relate to it! 5/5

This is really patriotic. i dont know if you mean it or not but i like it.

Nice poem, very nicely written

Utterly, totally and completely fantastic! SO glad I read it, it's such a good poem. I love how you convey emotion, and although I usually don't like rhyming poems, this one really struck my fancy. Fantastic work, well done!

Deep yet well written poem for your readers to enjoy! Thoroughly enjoyed this piece of work, keep it up and thankyou for taking the time to read mine. :)

I liked how you sort of mirrored this poem with a past and present tense. It really created something to keep in mind. What we think of this world, and then what we want this world to be. Really liked this poem..

Awh, another sad poem hun. I didnt like this one as much but it was still good. The emotion was a little weak I felt. The descriptions and flow were good though. Keep up the good work sweetie. 5/5

This almost made me cry...again I liked how you showed your pesrspective from both sides.
You are a truly talented writer.
Another 5/5

I loved the concept of this poem. It seems like you made a deal to yourself when you were little && later in life it all just went down hill. It showed what you lost && what you begin to believe i think this is an amazing poem && your talented with doing a good job at it.

keep it up. keep on writing. love always && forever.

Very good poem. Easy to understand. Has great rhythm and good word choice.

Nice job flowed very well and everything seems to be in place and i relate to this poem keep it up