You have a way with writing that makes me smile. youre words are true.

Keep on writing on what you feel and like.

Well i think this is your style to write a poems of yours.. i felt emotionally some of the lines and i agree to misstress there are some lines also make me smile. well u've done a very nice job i appreciate god bless5/5

That was lovely, it was qwuite sad but the emotions got across and i loved it.
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I agree with misstress too. Makes me smile. Very well done, though it doesn't always fit in the rhyming, but I like that, it's different. 4/5
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Filled with emotions... it was beautifully written, had a flow, though very sad, i really touched me.. tears in my eyes...
keep up the splendid work..
take care..
luv,,
haya 3gab =]

If u accually wrote this i no exactly wat ur going thru cuz im in da same position

I liked this, i can relate, i like your style of writing, and i thought the flow and imagery was very good. 5/5

Very emotional and it did make me cry, takes a lot to do that so this poem really is good :D

Woah! As people have said before, its a very emotianal peice of writing. So meaningful. Wow.. Just wow. Its great! Keep it up! xx

5/5 great poem thanks for comment on "My hang up" keep writing

Unspoken desires,
never to be revealed.
Not a dad in my life,
my heart can't be healed...

wow definitely my fav stanza! very powerful ending, bravo... you can feel the pleading in the poem, the reaching out... good job