You Are My Heart

by xxEvilAngelxx   Oct 15, 2006


You are the engine of my heart and soul,
Nothing else in the world makes me run.
No one completes me as you make me whole,
While to me their attempts matter none.

Unlike most, you spent time with me,
Giving with kindness, not taking away.
After you left, I fell to stormy seas,
Leaving me stranded in an ominous day.

Without my center, I can't do a thing,
I'm a living rock in a flowing stream.
Everything around me in life is progressing,
When I'm dying away to nothing it seems.

With your love and care causing my mend,
It's you who won't let me fall to my end.

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  • 17 years ago

    by TheWorldFellNUWerentThere

    5/5. Great Poem! It meant alot to me cuz I feel like this towards a guy! Great writing! Well done!

  • 17 years ago

    by Megan

    I feel like i understand this poem perfectly. it wierd when someone else writes what you feel.

  • 17 years ago

    by LadyPearl

    "Without my center, I can't do a thing,
    I'm a living rock in a flowing stream."

    Beautiful lines. Great flow. The rhymes didn't sound forced. Good job

  • 17 years ago

    by Stephanie

    Aww..So sweet yet sad at times. Great job with this one. And thinks for the constructive criticism, it meant a lot to me! :) 5/5 You're a great writer, keep it up!

    Innoc3ntStar

  • 17 years ago

    by Arcane Blondie

    HEHE! I love it---The only error I found is on the second line; you have ''my'' instead of ''me''...Then in the last line I think it would sound better if instead of "It's" you put "it is", but that's just an opinion...The rhyme is great and none of it sounded forced at all. The flow is flawless and your word choice made this poem magical---5/5! =-D

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