by Misstress Oct 16, 2006
category :
Love, romance /
lost love
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Stirring moonbeams off the lake, |
by Bret Higgins
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As tears drips from my heart, |
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Wow! Beautiful poem! Love the emotian included in the poem. And the choice of vocab is great!! A great poem alltogerther! Keep it up!! xx |
by BlueDreams
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Beautiful penned myfriend, within free verse you writing here, i liked the way how you describle them, so heartfelt emotions penned, awesome! |
by LadyPearl
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Nicely composed Free-style. Great vocab, imagery, and feelings. keep it up |
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I like this . THe word choice is really nice, and the emotions ... Wow . I love it . |