I'm speechless. That is just remarkable. You are one of the most talented writers i have come across, honestly. Every little detail you put into this poem made it perfect, i could just imagine her hair, & you grabbing her hand. The ending is very powerful. Excellent, once again. 5/5

Tammie

This is great! the imagery is simply fabulous. i have nothing but good things to say about this poem! good job, keep writing!
Emmmm

I really loved it. It was really sweet. I also loved the way your sentances just sort of kept going through the whole stanza. 5/5

A wonderful poem. Very well done.
Especially liked these lines:
As cold breeze
stirred the bland air,
her brown hair breathes life,
tangled with
soft Lilac petals
her skin glistened,
wafting
through the pathway,
the altar and into
my heart.

Excellent work.
Jeannie

This is a really good poem i loved it !! "gives a 5"

5/5. Very romantic. I loved it. It made me feel as I was in the picture!

Lovely penned, though simply but well expressive emotions, to love and to be loved, how romantic......... marvellous!

You have proved your great talent once again, very nice job, i really like it, 5/5

I am impressed, this piece used some brilliant imagery yet you did not fall into the trap of using ridiculously complicated vocabulary.

I enjoyed the descriptions and you really managed to paint a picture for me.

It seems there is a theme to the things I am "complaining" about.

Punctuality. In this piece, I think the full stops were unneccessary, they have the annoying habit of disrupting the flow and innterupting the imagination. They kept on bringing me out of the poem.

I think that it would work a lot better without any full stops, as it would really let the poem flow and make it an even better read.

I genuinely enjoyed this piece, and I think you have great talent and potential to improve even more.

Keep writing
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Wow..it was so breath-taking.like,it actually brang tears to my eyes.bravo.don't give up what you have.keep on going with what you can give.

Oh my! This is one beautiful, touching, poem. I love it. Again you have me speechless. I can't even find the right words to explain how I felt reading this poem. It's simply wonderful. The emotion, the flow, and the imagery were all wonderful. You have proven to me again what a magnificent poet you are. Keep up the excellent work! 5/5

Love
Letty

This is beautifully expressed.It touches all the senses and has such meaninhg-a great write.

Peace, Poetry, & Power,

Gary Jurechka

Hi musta na? namiss kita ah,, anyway ur poems so good.. and very interesting keep in touch takecare!!

lig

Well gr8 wrk now you are in my favourite list

Omg. that was really good! great imagery created in this poem! well done the choice of words was superb! flow was good! anyway keep writing good job on this one! :) 5/5!