While I wait

by Brittany C   Oct 17, 2006


I sit here,
In my cold, lonely, little room,
Thinking of you,
And of me,

I think of what we will do today,
And of being wrapped,
In your loving umbras,
As you gently kiss me,

It's hard,
When we are apart,
For I want to be with you,
Where I know I'm safe,
These are some things,
I think of when I'm waiting for you,

I am happy,
When I'm with you,
Though there have been times,
That I have been up set,
I have never been mad at you,
Only at certain people around us,

I need to be with you,
I love you so much,
Come pick me up,
And take me away,
To where we can be alone,

S I sit here,
In my lonely room,
That is cold as stone,
And think of you.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Vanessa

    In your loving umbras,
    umbras=embrace

    other than that this was well written, awesome flow, amazing word choice heartfelt strong emtions, What more could one ask for. 5/5

  • Great poem, loved the structure, good flow and well written 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Shad0w0faPh30n1x

    This is a very good poem, great flow and structure, i give it a 5!!! keep it up!!!

  • 17 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    I thought this was really sweet and I can relate to it.
    I loved the imagery and wording in here, it was a pleasure to read.

  • 17 years ago

    by Goran Rahim

    Your poems are all great, you have a great talent, keep it up. 5/5