Comments : I tried moving on

  • 17 years ago

    by Cathy

    Great poem I liked the way you put it all together!

  • 17 years ago

    by Rain

    In the rain it seems like you can see perhaps a bit more clearly after all that might have gone wrong the rain washes away what might have been aonther day. nicely put

  • 17 years ago

    by Kelly

    This poem is sad really but also brilliant. I loved it, you have captured how lonely the writer is and how helpless they feel to do anything about the longing! Amazing poem, really struck a chord. 5/5

    Kelly
    xx

  • 17 years ago

    by Sweet lig

    This i really nice poem,,, i like the story yah! nicely written just keep on writing all what u feel great job

  • Great poem, so well written nice structre and flow, its a unforced rhythm... i loved it 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Mousie

    Thank you so much for the comments on my poems... omg i loved this poem!! it was so sweet and heartfelt, i really felt it deserved more than the vote it's gotten! You're very talented, and i look forward to reading some of your other writes.

    oh well baby its starting to get late,
    just don't ever forget that we were so great,
    sweet dreams for you and sweet dreams for me,
    the only place the sweetness may be

    that was totally my fav part!! loved those lines, they can be so true!

  • 17 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    I loved this.
    It was so sweet yet so very sad.
    You did a wonderful job with the imagery and wording, and I thought it flowed really well.

  • 17 years ago

    by Romantic Lover

    So sad, so touching.

  • 16 years ago

    by Live WeLL

    Aww this is really sweet. I really like your style of writing. Very nice job - it's easy to tell from your writing that everything is genuine and comes from the heart. Keep it up =)

  • 16 years ago

    by The Queen

    Yeah so sad...i can relate..wish u get over her and find the right one for u..