WOw, there's so much anger. it has a good flow. u really adj well. someone like this person will never find lov:)

Wow, letty i luv to take out my anger on words and I think that is what you did here as its is so greatly written right from your heart......very touchy

i specially adore these words

"I have shed more than an ocean of tears
from the heartache you gave me too"
so true, 5/5.

Wow! this is a very good poem well very strong in expressing the idea of hate.wonderful work of work sweet heart,i feel very sorry if there is a a person on whom this hatred is directed.here i think i can feel in me the pain of a broken heart as i read it.
so sweet heart this is a wonderful work by you keep it up honey!

i love u honey!

I love this poem, you express yourself very well I can relate to this poem, I love my kids dad oh but I hate him to. Well great poem comment on mine sometime!

Speechless!..i definetly can relate!

Oh, I know this feeling well. I think this is a very well written write. Heartbreak, hate, anger and sadness all rolled into one. Great job. 5/5

Tammie xo

That was a very good poem... lots of emotion very angry... wonderful... 5/5

Dreadfully good. i was drawn in and stayed there the intire time.. great poem :)

Wow! This was amazing, i really liked this one.

Very, very good! I love the story.. Its all filled with hate. I get the emotion of murderous rage....
great job
5/5

This was ah`mazing . I don`t see anything wrong with it at all . Just wow . It was full of hate, but the flow and rhyming was just ahw`some .
I loved this .
..ღ__MiNDYY

Wow... i felt the hatred in there... you can really feel the emotion of the poem even if you dont anyone right now... its a good poem... it touches people and brings out something that isnt even there... great job... keep writing!

~angel~

I really know about this situation i can truly relate,,, actually most of the time i feel the same like this to someone who really broke my hearts.. this was so sad and very nice emotion of yours great job5/5

I can sooooooo relate to this...
i know exaclty how u feell!!!
wow i loved it. 5/5

Wow thats deeep!

Well... this poem was sad!
how someone can make promises and break them...
i know how this feels...
and always keep your head up...
well.. the poem was good...
i donno what to say...
cos it was just amazing...
thanks for the comment on my poem it means alot to me...

Amazing,Sorry About The Person Who Broke Your Heart! x

Very nice! well very angry but i can relate deeply to it and i luv the others that uv written as well keep writing ill be looking for your work :D a big two THUMBS UP!

Wow, this was awesome.
I really liked the last verse, it put some good emotion out there, like the rest of the poem. Good job.

Another good poem. The feelings are well explained and you know what’s happened (or what you’ve been through?) I like the descriptions, the end (because it is very strong) and especially this sentence; You lead me by a string for so many years.
It’s just touchy. So, good job.