I can relate to melancholy and sad pieces-and this is great-except for the feeling it brings.Look at the stars at night, feel the wind rustling through the leaves-revel in being alive.

Peace, Poetry, & Power,

Gary Jurechka

I really like this one!

After reading the first two comments
i felt bad just writting something simple like
good flow and rhyming but thats what i like about it most it just kept singging it was
just so easy to like. perfect actually
I like the way you look at things. I will
get to some of your other poems but not tonight its late Its amazing how fast time
goes by