Wow. it sounds like you have a lot to think about. dont let it get you down. this is a really great poem. i feel like i really understand what you're feeling.

I like the free flow of the poem, but I really love the content, which reflects a rare honesty in the game of love

I could really connect with this poem. It was very easy for a reader like me to understand what was expressed in it.

"The anger flooded threw my body,
As hatred stained my soul.
The space that was once yours,
Now nothing but a hole."

I loved this stanza the most, especially "As hatred stained my soul." Really effective. Nice job. =]

I really like this poem. Probably because I can relate to it completely. I know exactly how you feel in this because I know I'm pretty much doing the same thing right now and it really sucks. You're poem definitely made me think alot. You did an amazing job on this! You described everything very well and the flow and rhythm was very good. 5/5 on this! Keep it up!

Again this was a very nice poem. but the flow of this one was kind of rocky. I liked the whole concept of it and everything. I myself have been down that same road. This deserves nothing less than a 5/5 keep writing.

Letty

A long, deep sigh,
With a river of tears that follow.
It is getting harder for me to breathe,
My throat is dry, I can hardly swallow.

i LOVEEE the first stanza! (:
This poem was very nicely written .
Good flow, nice rhymes .
I liked it a lot .
Beautifully done .

&Yes i am really 13(:
..ღ__MiNDYY

Pretty good though I don't think you should have added that last stanza. I like it better without it. On one line you put:

And remember what he hated-

I see another guy,
And remember what he hated-
The thought of me with another guy,
I'm sorry, but honey, you're too late.

I don't understand, you saw a new guy, and you remembered him .. his hatred of the new guy??? maybe rephrase that... I don't know... other than that this poem was great!

Great Job!

5/5

I loved the flow of the poem. i think u did a great job on this. very well written. keep up the good work 5/5

Good job...the poem flowed well n the lines were filled with emotions which came right from your heart....maybe re doing the rhyme scheme could give a better look..i loved the first stanza but the last stanza put my impression down=(
Maybe it means a lot to you...anyway...as such Good job m'dear!..
Kp writing!
5/5
xxPoojaxx

I love u're poems