Raining tears

by seth   Oct 20, 2006


The rain remind me off my freedom, no one can hold the rain in one place no one can tell the rain where to go, as i sit here and look out my window crying, realizeing ill never be as free as the rain, how can man deny me what it so easily conceds to the rain, freedom. that is all i ask for. but as i feel a tear drip from my face i realize i do have a unique freedom still a freedom i can call my own. this freedom cant ever be taken away from me. my tears

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  • 17 years ago

    by Kellie

    Great writing, I would of never of thought of the rain as having freedom but it is a great comparison.
    Kelliexx

  • 18 years ago

    by Peachez612

    This poem is so Good Seth. If it's true, wat's wrong? I really LIKE this poem! It's really good! u gotta keep it up!

    ~Peachez612~

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    ~Brianna K.~