Comments : Betrayed

  • 17 years ago

    by Gary Jurechka

    Though this is very cynical-I can relate to the bitterness and betrayal.However, never give up, never lose hope.As long as you retain the capacity to love in your heart, love and happiness will eventually find you.Hang in there.

    Gary Jurechka

  • 17 years ago

    by MischieviousMya

    Wow short and diff but i like. the title totally explains what you have written...most people (including myself) tend to forget to relate to the title lol.

    thanx for the comment aswell =]]

  • 17 years ago

    by nikki

    Ehy great write, it happens so often to everyone, so everyone can relate to this poem, i loved it, 5 from me maybe if you have enough time you could have vote and comment on more of mine. your an awsome writer.