Sin

by Carissa   Oct 22, 2006


Shes loosing her mind
slowly,but surely
her heart starts to drowned
twisting and turning
no one is there to save her soul
no one is there
shes loosing control
she looks up to the skies
apologizing for sin
she cant bare the cries
bubbling up within
she tries and she tries
to bare a grin
but all she comes up with
is another sin.

--CNH

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  • 17 years ago

    by Em

    :D
    That was an awesome poem.

  • 18 years ago

    by David

    Ah the finsih was excellent. well done and plz, keep writing, your work is unique and amazing!

    5/5 David

  • 19 years ago

    by ~*love me not*~

    This is very cool. I'm in love with it. Chek out some of my poems!
    ~*love me not*~

  • 19 years ago

    by Nicole

    Beautiful poem...even though its sad its still beautiful. 5/5 well done and very well written. keep writing

  • 19 years ago

    by Catastrophic Beauty

    Nice poem. It had good rhyming and a good message.

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