Illogicality of life

by Keath   Oct 24, 2006


Who am I, standing here all alone
On the darkside of the doorway
Why has everybody abandoned me
Why are there no words left to say

Who are we, living without a reason
In this place without a name
Why does nobody seems to care
Why do we stand alone in the rain

Who are you, trying to be important
Impressing everybody with your words
Why are you still taking revenge
Why does it appears that the past hurts

Who are we, poisoning this quiet place
With dirt, with hate, with regret
Why do we not realize it
Why is the end of life always sad

Who am I, thinking all of this
In the deepest of my mind
Why do I not tolerate fate
Why am I the only one left behind

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  • 17 years ago

    by Lauren Waszkiewicz

    I loved his again! its so true! we're such UCKS. i cantthink of a real word. lol
    one thing i dont like is-
    Why do we not realize it
    it? you can do better than that!!!
    why do we not realize this ___
    sheesh. lol
    i also think the last line is alittle too long, you could get rid of only. and itd make it shorter so itd flow better.

    x3 Lauren

  • 17 years ago

    by Letty

    Wonderful! I have a question though. Why don't you use punctuation? I liked the whole poem and its meaning. You did a excellent job. 5/5
    Keep up the good work.

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