I love the flow of that poem...theres alot of feelings coming out of the poem..(i understand some)...i like your idea on how to write it(the style is awsome)!!!
auna

Wow ur very talented aswell thats amazing

That;s awesome :) keep it up

Keep writting i can't wait for next one
they're all excellent

Omg- This is REALLY good!!!
I liked all the questions... xD
5!

btw thanks for commenting. =)

Dude!
i loved this poem so kool!!!!!!!!!

i love the title too!

This is an excellent poem. it is amazing. 5/5. u're a very talented writer. keep writing

Heya steff guess who?? lol
this poem rox!!!!!!!!!!

Its good but a little off i guess but good

Oh my goodness your a really good writer!!! This was a nother good one. Well Ive only read two but im really impressed.

Wow this poem is WAY good.
You are a poet no question about it.

Wow this poem is WAY good.
You are a poet no question about it.

Tell me me that you are the girl you describe in tour poems and i will fall in love with your twisted personality...You are definately going to my favorites...

WOW!!!! I love your writting.

Great poem :) well done

Woah! this poem is seriously surreal... especially this two stanza,

Can you save her twisted soul?
Can you make this demon whole?

Great poem!!

Simply amazing, im speachless