Breath of air

by Keath   Oct 25, 2006


It is no longer a nightmare
It has never been a dream
I am chased down in the dark
Caught by a single gleam

The air stirs around my feet
Gluing me down on a spot
Doors start slamming with shrill noise
Suddenly it is getting too hot

My breathing is becoming too erratic
Forming clouds in the abrupt cold
The glue releases me before the end
I fall down without a hold

The air grasps on my clothes
Forcing my naked body to shake
Just before the end I breathe in
Realizing that I'm no longer awake

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  • 17 years ago

    by Letty

    This was wonderful! I didn't see anything wrong except that you were missing punctuation marks, but other then that I think that this was a excellent poem. 5/5 Also I want to thank you for your critique you left in my comments. I will try my best to put them to good use in the future, I really appreciated them because that is what helps make me a better poet. Keep up the excellent work.

    Letty

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