I thought your poem was beautiful, it scares me actually coz it rings so true to me. Love it *mwa*

Wow, raw emotion and so so heartfelt, the only flaw i spotted was that the fourth stanza wasn't as fluent as the others. other than that this was a true classic. i loved the feelings within it and i think it was a very well done original piece.

Go Sarah!!! This is like one of the bestest poems you ever wrote my love. It's so sweet and natural coming from you. Cyber tear*

You are such an amazing writer! I'm in shock and I'm speachless...Great,Wonderful,Wow!

Wow i really love this poem. its amazzzing! =]

Wow every word made me feel how you felt....please read my latest poems i would love to see what you think

Wow this is really good sarah
i really wish i would have thought this one up, but oh well! you did an amazing job with it, you're not the only one that feels this, i still do and its been a year!
good job, dont stop
<3 Rachel

Hi Sarah!

I really love this poem. It's a sad one, but sometimes sadness makes you appreciate the happiness. I like that your poem puts thoughts into my head-it's effective.

I enjoyed the concept and the structure in which you wrote it, your flow was very nice, it all made sense. Great job!!

Your Family; CC&P are here for you!!

I can really relate to your poem. fantastic job