Nice job! this was very vivid and portrays the pain of a heartbreak. sincerely, Trinity

You have melted my heart..
and im sorry to hear ur in such pain..
please keep writing..

Im honestly speachless.. ='(
x

Wow that was great i love your poem it reminds me of how i felt thanks alot... for writing such good poems plz rate and comment mine tanks a bunch

I really liked this, it was filled with so much emotion and feeling.
The imagery, flow, rhyme scene and wording were excellent.
5/5

This was really good sweetie.. It was very sad though. In the 4th stanza my flow was thrown off a little because of the change of rhyme scheme. I think you should stick to one rhyme scheme througout the whole poem as it might flow better then. The emotion was clear in this but I would have like to see more detail. Very nicely done though 5/5

Yo I like this i am going to show this to my gurl
yo its tight

Absolutely amazing!
u can definitely touch a person

+.+ Lost love hurts. Lol. I loved the picture that you can create in your readers head +.+

Wow... thats a wonderful poem... u put it in good words, all that goes thru ur head n mind. i tryed puttin it in words for a long time now. so i can really relate to this... keep up the good writing..

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This Poem sounds kind of familiar! But not copy right it sounds like my life! I love it!
Priscella

I really like this poem, i feel like this sometimes

Wow!!!!! that's an awesome poem!!! greatjob!

This is an m'azing poems!

This is such an amazing poem, i really wish that i could write like that.you truly are an inspiration

It stuns me... how right now i got tears fallin down haha ya u made a man cry holy shit.. sry for the cussin but wow man, hahaha i felt everyword, yeh talk about an emotional dude, but graet great ahh god i cant put a word to it.. the first verse.. it hypnotized me it just made me stare at the words and make them fall into the pieces of my heart, damn! haha great job ur the best poet, i love ur style, u are defiently my number one poet

I love this poem... you are such a great writer. Keep up the good work. I've added you to my favorites and I'm looking forward to reading more =)

Aw i loved it. i was able to read it easily which is a big bonus, it was smooth and nothing was forced, i absolutely loved this part: "tripping on sorrow". its brilliant!! well done babe.
Much Love And Many Kisses, Bex.

Wow thats amazing!! ur rli gd at writting poems. well done!! 5/5