DARK PENCIL

by Reborn Rival   Oct 26, 2006


Today more imbalance, it dawns inside
My life, my love and all I despise
Thee only release, a pencil deseeds
Knowing only problems, excluding my needs

Leave it behind, face forward your ways
I want to let go, but it wont erase
This is not what I want, nor does this page
This pencil is feeding, its one with my rage

Let go please, detach from my veins
The remaining will it weakens, but fear remains
Im not done here do you hear what I say?
It didnt respond, it proceeds to rip away

Consistently revealing all concealed inside
Piece by piece all except my only pride
My heart and its essence bring me no shame
Unwritten it shall stay for it may be to blame

I clutch to my dreams? Unsure of why!
My fall you desire, for your life I must die
You cannot take me, an echo replies
Those are were my words and echo lies

To be Cont……

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  • 17 years ago

    by Christie

    Wow, this is really touching. didn't quite understand what it was about, but there will always be people who won't understand poems like these.

    great poem though, 5/5
    well written, great flow,
    xxx

  • 17 years ago

    by tinna

    Talent is all i can say.

  • 17 years ago

    by xDieRomanticx

    I like it. XDXDXD

  • 17 years ago

    by fhdfnvgyntfugy

    I love tjhis poem....beautiful...hey sweetie i am missing u too...i really wanna talk to u again

  • 17 years ago

    by Simon Hayes

    What a powerful piece... Dark and powerful, running high with emotions. Great work!!