Unsettled Release

by N4than   Oct 29, 2006


Figuring my life,
Helpless in divide,
Affiliated with strife,
Struggling in its tide...

Silently I cry,
Screaming without yelling,
Till death I defy,
Tonight I'm falling...

I'm filling with distrust,
All I sense is actuality,
And nothing's more unjust,
Than this corpulent forgery...

I've been trying to tell you,
You were completely wrong,
You cited too few,
I've been right all along...

Verification only too liberal,
There's nothing to contest,
I told you how I felt,
And every time I could feel detest...

Lapses in legislation,
Is it true?
There's always exceptions,
I'll never be through with you...

I know how I feel,
And I know you,
You've made your appeal,
There's nothing more you can do...

Open I was torn,
Could you not see?
I always loved you more,
Please don't ever forget me...

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  • 17 years ago

    by I Miss Him

    I love it!

  • 17 years ago

    by Stacey

    Mmm your rhythm goes off a few times. count your syllables and say it out loud. that way you can tell wheat needs to be longer/shorter to make the poem flow.

    *pokes nathan hard* didnt you know that?!?! :P:P