That's a wonderfully funny one, Angela! i've always loved the fairy world and this one was real cool!

peace
shobhana

Aww lol cute poem, and very well written, you must have a great imagination, there are a few spelling mistakes in here, so maybe you should cheak that, but other than that thsis poem was very good..deffinatly a 5/5..
if you get time could you please read and comment on my poems, it would be much apprechiated, and ill return the favour lol. Kirsty xx

Great write. Really cute.

Oh my....angela, how you make me smile....simply yet sweet penned you potray here, lovely piece!

An excellent rthym and cute storyline!

Ahhh, that's so cute. I love it.
Heart, Jessica.

Very funny i like it i am still laughing 7/7
peace be with u
softmember

Lol, very nice. I especially like the last stanza. Great job. 5/5

Lol...this si super Cute Ang I love it!! He was an ugly flea..haha that made me laugh and this is such a "you poem"...I have no idea what I mean by that but heck I'm a goof!
Excellent write it was so cute!
Kristy and Chelsey
Krissey

HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAAHAHA!!! funy...... :)

Cute poem:)

I like this alot...keep it up!

Thats cute

Cute

Haha omg I love it!! so cute ^-^

Thank you so much for writing this! This really made me smile and laugh, it was not only funny, it was silly, cheeky and childish all rolled into one.

The words fat fly just made me laugh - I do not know why they are so amusing, but they are.

I liked the flow to this, and the rhyme, it was not forced and felt really enjoyable to read. It is a poem you could read again and again, and it is a really therapeutic poem to cheer you up.

Well done, and thank you for making me smile.