Comments : Perfect Is What We Aim For

  • 17 years ago

    by Jessica

    Ooh, this was impressive. It was short and quite simple but had a catchy flow and good wording. The emotion was clear and I love the last line. It adds that personality to the poem. Nicely done 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex

    Perfect takes some effort, and that you can't forget.
    Perfect is what we aim for, Perfect is what we get.
    ((No one is perfect, this poem is rendered false.))

    But, nonetheless, it is a very well written and well thought out poem. I'm not sure what to say...Cliche rhyming, though. Otherwise, good job.

    xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex 5.5

  • 17 years ago

    by ALEX

    I never said I was Perfect.
    Just what Perfect is to me.
    Perfect isn't something one can be.
    It's not an adjective, to me.

  • 17 years ago

    by Brittany C

    Excellent poem. Once again great rhyming. 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Robie Lincer

    Very very True...
    we do aim for perfection all the time...
    but not always get it...
    imagine if the world was perfect...
    how would we feel... hehe...

    it was a very nice poem!
    loved it lots...
    keep it up!

  • 17 years ago

    by N J Thornton

    Very thought provoking write. Perfect is something we crave these days, yet anything rarely is as we constantly want more...
    This was a very simple yet truthful write. I enjoyed it very much.
    Oh and while I'm here hope you had a nice thanksgiving, I don't celebrate it (I'm English) but thanks for the nice thoughts. Also, I was reading "about you" we're pretty similar, curly hair, in love, love cats, hate drugs, easily confused, and I'm somewhat invisible too...Anyway take care,
    Silver J

  • 17 years ago

    by donna

    Very nice.. It flowed really nicely, and the rhythmn was really good too.. well done 5/5 xx

  • 17 years ago

    by Leanne

    Another great poem, i've really enjoyed reading your work and i'll be adding you to my favourites :)
    I look forward to reading more of your poems.
    5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Espoirfailed

    Great poem, ur work flows really well! the title drew me in because it reminded me of the band "cute is what we aim for". really well written piece of work, well done