A nice poem, short, sweet yet packs a powerful message
Nicely done =)
5/5
*Gem*

Loved it...nicely done!
keep up the good work!!
5/5
bree x

5/5 I like it lots its when they dont tell u things that turns u into a worrying maniac lol keep writing

Nice work

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A good choice of subjects in this day and especially you point of not accepting lies.

Nice flow in this poem. (I read it out loud xD lol) And I know this feeling, of you wanting somebody to trust you.. Trust takes time I guess... =] anyway, another 5/5 for you!
x
-Birgit
your friend too ^^

Excellent Work, Short message, and beautyful... 5/5 Keep It Up Good Work.... I Trust You..:) 5/5

OH itS a lovelY writinG...i prefeR mucH... thankS lol.....

luzaN

Very much stirring, let them flourish.. 5/5
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Nazeer

HoW sweeT iS thiS poeM anD i loveD iT. verY mucH fascinatinG. keeP yR writinG tO shimmeR likE aS thiS onE.... 5/5.

'trusT'

luzaN