Wow, heartfelt poem, very great job.5/5

So sad, and so true. I hope you're feeling better by now. =)

I think the saddest stanza was the first one, it really caught my attention.

Good job! 5/5

Keep writing.

XoXo
Gaby

So sad, and so true. I hope you're feeling better by now. =)

I think the saddest stanza was the first one, it really caught my attention.

Good job! 5/5

Keep writing.

XoXo
Gaby

This was so sad, i almost cried!
I can totally relate to this.
I loved the imagery and wording and the flow was good.
5/5

I was almost crying too, you can just imagine how many people go through this. i loved it 5/5 xxx

Aww hunny. I know what you're going through. It's happened to me so many times. You're just gunna have to learn that he's not worth it. It took me forever, and it'll most likely take you enough time as well. If he didn't see how much you loved him, then he's not worth it. If you ever need to talk, feel free to PM me. =)

Aanyways...The flow was a little rocky, but I didn't dock you anything for it. It looked like a story to me, and poems that look like stories don't really flow all that much. xD The emotion and the sadness was clear to see, and it fits in well with the poem. Great write. =) 5/5 xoxo

Samantha

Awww! Such a sad peom! It had a great flow, and the words used throughout the poem really made the poem a great read! The imagery was really good as well. Keep it up! xx

This was so sad.. The last line almost brought tears to my eyes...

The emotion in this poem was superb, I think it flowed nicely too.. Well done on an enjoyable sad read 5/5 xx

Beautiful sad penned, so heartfelt, write, heartbreaking, yet flowed with beautiful emotions...ohhh...how life can to be change, but very dificult to probhing fate! anyway hope thing doing well with you, take care. bert ~

There is so much emotion in this poem...it's amazing. I love poetry with emotion and feeling in it, and this most definitely has it.

The only thing I suggest you try to work on is rhythm..other than that it was great.

I like this. Keep it up

This is exactly how I was feeling a little while ago.....it passes. I'm glad u wrote this poem xxx its fantastic xx

Aww man your in love its so sad but i wish you good luck next time in your love experience

Wow, a very emotional write here. I loved it. You have such great ways to use your words and the way you word it. Awesome Job, keep up the good work.

Ciao, Joe

Fantastic write! I loved the last line so much! This poem was filled with such emotion and truth--- I know exactly how you feel. In the third line of the second stanza, I suggest taking since out and writing "except for me". Keep up the great work!

xxEvilAngelxx

This poem is filled with sadness..reallly great work i can really feel how you felt!

Your poem is good. Keep up the good work! Please comment & vote my poems I would really appreciate it!

This is a greart poem, i love the ending.. sets it off perfectly x

This poem is soo...Sad lol.
It's really good, though
I like it it's sweet

Hey,
Great poem you are very talented,I could feel the intensity in your words,
I know how you feel if you ever want to talk im always here,
Please comment on some of my poems,
It would be greatly appreciated,
Love cass xoxo

I absolutely loved this poem. I have been crying all morning to be honest - and this poem was perfect. It said every single thought in my mind perfectly in a poem. Perfection in writing. Great Job. I have two poems somewhat similar to this, they're called No More and No Longer Won. You should check them out and let me know what you think. They're along the same lines. Once again - great poem. 5/5