Mind of caos
by Miakoda Nov 1, 2006
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My heart is punding in my chest I cannot think I can barley hear my words. I feel faint. Will he say yes will he say no? So emotional so.....I don't know im lost for words ....wordless in a mind of caos |
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17 years ago
by Liz
Short and different. But to the point. Which is what makes it so good! =P I loved this just beacause I've felt this way on a few occassions. Tehe. =]
Only thing..."caos" should be "chaos".
Keep it up!!
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17 years ago
by Poison Ivy
Very short poem but i felt the emotion described.wow this is how im going to feel when i tell that special someone that i like them.Excellent job on this poem i rated it a 5:)
