by Miakoda Jul 7, 2008
category :
Sadness, depression /
other
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To never feel the pain again |
by Simply Josh
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Wow. That was my first expression. The flow worked well and the last line created an underlining conclusion. Great job |
by Dan
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Short, sweet, and beautiful. I understand the whole concept of this poem. To lock away yourself to stop from being hurt. So you never have to feel weak to someone else. That you just want to be alone. Honestly, great work. |