Two Faced Heart

by ashley   Nov 4, 2006


My dear friend I have a secret
One I wish to share
My heart is not one but two
I can find solace nowhere
One heart proclaims friendship
And that is all and well
Yet the other craves much more
I wonder if you can tell
I try my best to diminish
This love for you I have
It is a trying battle
If one heart wins the other is stabbed

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  • 16 years ago

    by Georgi

    This is my fav one of yours so far, the description is brill. =]
    Just a suggestion, i think that you should try writing this in a more structured form, like
    abab
    or
    aabb
    and have seperate stanzas, i think your style of writing would really blossum. =]
    Geo
    ps. if u have time please comment my latest poem?

  • 17 years ago

    by brown eyes and a melancholy smile

    I love this piece!!! i can very much relate. great wording, flow, and concept. great write! =)

    take care,
    hana

  • 17 years ago

    by kate

    This maybe a short poem but it holds such significance, i really related with it, thank you for putting my feelings into words.

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